I think a different drum beat could really bring something else out of it.
ya this beat is a lil too straight-up. I was going
for a marching kind of sound. ill prolly do a remix
definitely incorporate this into a song.
I think a melody should come in right where it ends.
dont think so.
This sucks haha. You've lost the main purpose of music- to convey emotion and feeling. This just sounds like a lot of electronic riffs shoved together. Seriously, I cant believe how full of yourself you are because you made a generic trance song that doesn't even flow properly.
you could at least put it in a nicer way. it doesnt SUCK, it could just use more improvement and a less generic sound. you dont have to be cruel.
im not full of myself dipshit, im open to criticsm because i want to get better, last tiem i checked that's just called being human
this is awesomeee mann im stonedd
sloppy playing at a few parts. a lot of it sounds off time too. still ok I GUESS/
Thanks for listening.
I know what you mean. I've become a better guitarist since I made this, so I'll have to re-make it with better quality and better playing etc...
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